Monday, March 23, 2009

If There Was a Day

If there was a day
When you'd be mine
When the world couldn't steal you away
When your lips will be forever stuck to mine
When you and I would become us
When I'd forever forget the word boring
I wish I wake up in that day's morning.

If there was a smile
Similar to yours
Lined with perfection
Built with affection
I still would turn away
Cause I will still miss
Your soft kiss.
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12 comments:

  1. VnukotMarch 23, 2009 at 8:38 AM

    Sorry, I don't like it! :/

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  2. DEDO ISUSEMarch 23, 2009 at 8:43 AM

    don`t listen to IT

    IT knows....nothing :)))

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  3. LluviaMarch 23, 2009 at 1:03 PM

    Luminata, this poem is beautiful and sincere. And you know that I would know! I love it, especially the second half. Wish I'd thought of it. How does that make you feel? =) Please share more often...

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  4. LuminataMarch 24, 2009 at 3:02 AM

    Hey, thanks for the kind words. :)

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  5. I.V.March 24, 2009 at 11:22 AM

    Somehow, I like it as well. Cheers!

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  6. AnonymousMarch 25, 2009 at 3:45 AM

    A nice love poem. I liked the pace and the gentle tones.

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  7. LuminataMarch 25, 2009 at 5:13 AM

    I just started posting my writings, so your comments mean a lot Mamta! :)

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  8. jefalogs04March 25, 2009 at 7:37 AM

    Hi Luminata! Thanks for the kind words on one of my posts! Just read some of your writting and you have some powerful stuff here! :) I'll be waiting for more of your posts! :p

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  9. LuminataMarch 25, 2009 at 9:57 AM

    I am glad you liked it as well! :)

    Hugs! :)

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  10. jefalogs04March 25, 2009 at 11:15 AM

    wrote some poetry myself on my blog/ journal/ thought post. :) tho it's not any good. :p

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  11. LuminataMarch 25, 2009 at 1:52 PM

    I wrote you on your blog about the poetry! :)

    Hugs! :)

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  12. 小雪人 (lil' Sn0wY)March 28, 2009 at 2:18 AM

    I like this poem, it's sincere ;)

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